by Lefty » Mon Jan 29, 2024 4:16 pm
As a former subscriber, I must say your artwork is superb. At the same time, you use far too much dialogue. As the saying goes, a picture is worth a thousand words. Very little or no dialogue is needed when the images are sufficient to explain the scenes. That’s true with most of your work, and the overuse of dialogue does nothing more than crowd the artwork. Similarly, you don’t need to add sound effects. For instance, when you show a giant woman stroking a shrunken girl’s foot with a finger, you don’t need to type “Tickle Tickle” beneath the giant woman’s finger. We get it.
As a former subscriber, I must say your artwork is superb. At the same time, you use far too much dialogue. As the saying goes, a picture is worth a thousand words. Very little or no dialogue is needed when the images are sufficient to explain the scenes. That’s true with most of your work, and the overuse of dialogue does nothing more than crowd the artwork. Similarly, you don’t need to add sound effects. For instance, when you show a giant woman stroking a shrunken girl’s foot with a finger, you don’t need to type “Tickle Tickle” beneath the giant woman’s finger. We get it.