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The Grither
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Post by The Grither » Tue Aug 10, 2021 8:51 pm

When I started writing this I had intended it to be a more violent revenge oriented short but as I went on I kept making changes and taking out or toning down the violence until it wasn't even close to what I started but I liked it even more. This is all I have for now but I have ideas on where to go that I'm working on:

“Come on! She won’t be out for much longer” Sasha shouted as the three tiny women reached the top of the machine they knew was their only hope for survival. She was followed closely by Jessica who reached down and helped Brittany up.

They knew they had to work fast, even though they had managed to save up several days worth of the sleeping medication Rachel used on them and get it into her tea, it was several days worth for people their size so it wouldn’t last too long on a “big” person like Rachel, who at 5’4 might as well have been King Kong to the three shrunken women. What would have been enough to put them out for days or maybe even permanently would probably only be enough to keep her down for a few hours at most and they had already used two of them to get where they were.

Once they were up they quickly surveyed their surroundings and got to work.
They had spent weeks studying the notes on the machine that their captor was unaware they knew about so they knew how the machine worked and were ready. Sasha quickly went to a nearby knob and turned it as far to the right as it would go, in her reduced state it would barely budge so she had to sit in front of it and push with her tiny legs, when she finished she stood up on shaky legs having been weakened from the exertion and went over to the next step while Jessica flipped a switch from blue to orange, the color choices seemed odd and random, something that came up more than once during their planning meetings, sometimes even encouraging some humor, something the three desperately needed but in the end they just decided it was probably a random choice.
Sasha had suggested that after they were big again and shrunk Rachel to even smaller than she made them that they could torture her for the information which the others agreed they’d consider after this was behind them. Shrinking Rachel was definitely something they all wanted to do but they agreed that it would be treated as a secondary objective, if after they were restored to their right sizes it didn’t seem like a sure thing to shrink her they would escape and come back later with more help to make sure they took her out the right way. They weren’t going to risk being shrunk again.
Like Sasha’s attempt at turning the dial, Jessica struggled with the switch, having to use what little strength she possessed in her shrunken body.
Brittany jumped on a big red button using all of her insignificant weight which took several tries until she heard the sound of the door to the nearby chamber open. Once that was done she ran back to the makeshift rope they had assembled from collecting scraps of giant hair, thread, and anything that could be be used to climb up and slid down to take her place in the chamber as the three had agreed.
Once on the floor Brittany made her way as fast as she could to the large glass cylinder at the other end of the room. Seeing it towering over her brought back memories of her first sight after being shrunk. She had managed to struggle out of what she had no idea were her now giant clothes when she looked around at her surroundings with no idea of what she was looking at.
She thought she was in a massive building, something bigger than she had ever seen before, big enough to hold an entire glass structure that seemed to a couple hundred feet high. As she was trying to figure it out she was quickly scooped up and brought in front of Rachel’s face, seeing a giant for the first of what would be many times. She said something in the unnaturally deep voice she would eventual learn to understand was how she would hear all giants now but to this day she couldn’t remember as she passed out almost immediately from shock.
When she reached the cylinder, she climbed up into it, something that was a struggle in itself, at a foot off the ground the platform was about twice her height so she had to jump and pull herself up. As she slid herself up she found herself once again wishing she had clothes, being nude didn’t always bother her except for when she was being groped and ogled by Rachel, but she could feel herself being scratched by the rough floor as she slid over it.
Once she was in she took a small moment to catch her breath and gestured to her friends in the distance.
Sasha and Jessica watched anxiously as the tiny woman made her way and breathed a sigh of relief when she climbed inside and gave the thumbs up. With that the two of them jumped on the button again, still having to try more than once with even their combined weight being around a few ounces, and watched as the door closed, something that felt like it took ages as they knew their giant tormentor could come down at any moment and they’d all be done for.
Finally, when it shut Jessica ran over to a lever just a little taller than she was and tried to move it. When it barely budged her heart sank, the notes they had been reading may have explained how the machine worked but it didn’t mention anything about how much strength would be needed to operate it, they just assumed the person doing so would be normal size and not somewhere around six inches tall.
“Sasha!” she called out, “Come help me with this thing!”
Sasha ran over immediately and after some struggling the two were able to get it moving. It was still going a lot slower than they would have liked, when it was about halfway to the top they heard footsteps from upstairs and they knew she was awake and searching for them. Knowing it would only be a matter of time before she found them, the two women put all the strength they had left in their miniature bodies and managed to get it going faster.

As she struggled to move what she knew was something that should be so easy she wouldn’t even have to think about it, Sasha felt a familiar pit in her stomach that she always felt whenever she was reminded how small she was. None of the three girls had ever fully accepted being shrunk to less than the size of a Barbie doll and they all hated being reminded of their predicament but for Sasha it had always seemed to hit her hardest, something Rachel was well aware of and took advantage of every chance she got. The first thing she made them all do when she woke them up in the morning was stand next to a ruler she had stuck to the wall of the fish tank that served as their home/prison, and every time she looked up and saw the mark for five inches just above her head while her “friends” (over time they did become friends out of necessity but at first they were simply three women in the same bad situation who got along because they had no choice) were closer to six she would have to hold in her sobs. She didn’t know them when they were what she now considered “big” but she could tell they weren’t as tall as she used to be which hurt. She was always proud of her height and although she never looked down on shorter women she always felt like she was lucky to be close to six feet tall yet here she was now, the runt.
As she was dwelling on this she felt the pain in her already tired legs increase to a point beyond bearable and she tried to shift them to take some of the weight off. Unfortunately, even that tiny shift was enough to make Sasha lose her balance, sending the lever crashing down toward her. She felt like she was watching it in slow motion as it came closer and closer, finally striking her in the head and sending her falling backward. As she watched the ceiling, now looking like a large white blur due to the concussion she had experienced, get further away, she found herself wondering if she’d be big again in Heaven.
She felt at peace and wasn’t afraid of dying, but she was suddenly very worried that she’d still be less than five inches tall when she got where she was going after death and would they keep her as a pet there too?

Jessica barely had time to jump out of the way as the massive lever came crashing back into place, missing her by what felt like inches at her scale which meant millimeters in normal measurements.
When she landed she felt her ankle twist and felt a sharp pain, not having the luxury of checking to see if it was broken or not she stood up and rushed back over to the lever as fast she could.
“SASHA!” she called, getting nervous when she didn’t hear an answer, “SASHA! Are you ok? Please answer me!”
When she reached her destination her heart dropped when Sasha was nowhere to be found. Looking over at the lever she saw a large blood splatter that got her heart racing even more.
While she was frantically looking around for her friend she felt a large presence behind her. She nervously turned around expecting the giant fist that had held her so many times over the years to come smashing down and end her life but instead saw the smiling, now massive, face of Brittany. Their plan had worked and they were on their way to being restored! Or they were when she could find Sasha.

“Brit! Thank God!” she yelled up to her giant friend.
Brittany, who was experiencing being “big” for the first time in a very long time and seeing her first tiny person ever, took a moment to take it in then leaned in closer so she could hear her small friend. She knew that their voices were higher due to being so small, something Rachel had made sure to remind them during their unending humiliation, she made them listen to recordings of themselves all the time, even having them sing pop songs and pretend they were The Chippettes, but hearing it for herself was odd and in less urgent circumstances she would have found it cute and maybe even funny.
Upon seeing the new giantess lean in, Jessica told her that Sasha was missing and asked her to check the ground near the machine.
She quickly knelt down and started looking, it didn’t take long for her to find what she was looking for but had hoped not to find, when the lever snapped back it sent Sasha flying over the edge and onto the floor, a drop of a several feet, which at her size had been fatal.
Brittany felt tears welling up in her eyes and cursed herself for not making it back to the machine fast enough to catch her but she knew there wasn’t time to mourn yet and stood up.
She soon heard Jessica’s squeaky voice calling out to her asking if she found anything. She stood up to tell her small friend the bad news and get her grown back so they could get out of there when she heard the door to the basement swing open and a familiar, yet not as intimidating sounding, voice called out. Rachel had found them and she sounded pissed,
“Ok you little shits, I told you I wouldn’t tolerate any attempts to escape! If you come out now I promise I’ll make this quick.”
Brittany quickly ran over and hid in a corner while Jessica did her best to hide from her spot on the control panel of the machine but even though she was small she was still too big to hide properly and the giant woman spotted her right away.
As she rushed over to where her misbehaving pet was waiting she stepped on something and felt a crunch, looking down she saw another pet lying mangled in a pool of blood under her foot.
“Which one of you was that?” she demanded as she kept going toward her target, “Whoever she was, she got off lucky”
Jessica closed her eyes and cowered in fear as the giantess approached and waited for the familiar sensation of being grabbed violently by a giant hand. And waited. It seemed to be taking an awfully long time so she opened her eyes and saw the giantess was now standing with her back to the machine. She knew right away that she was seeing Brittany, now restored and hopefully about to kick some ass so she was shocked when she started laughing instead.
“Oh, little Brit! I bet you thought you were so big, didn’t you? Well, enjoy this while it lasts because you’re going to be much smaller than you’ve ever been”
She didn’t even seem to be worried about Brittany which concerned Jessica and as the giant woman was laughing she shifted to the right and she saw what she found so funny. Although Brittany was indeed larger and would be able to pass as normal in the world, she was clearly much shorter than she should have been. She remembered them talking about their previous heights and although Sasha was the tallest before all this, Brittany wasn’t exactly short herself. She had guessed that she would have been at least 5 inches taller than Rachel and they always talked about how great it would be to see her shorter than them and give her the beating she deserved. Seeing her now, she wondered if Brittany was even five feet tall, Rachel seemed to have at least a foot on her, but realized she had more important things to worry about, like not being killed by this monster.

Thinking quickly, she yelled up to Rachel,
“Hey! Down here you dumb bitch! Why don’t you restore us and see how tough you are!”
She knew it was a stupid thing to say but it got her attention and she turned to face her, the amused look still on her face but quickly turning to anger. Rachel started to say something but was suddenly flung forward, hitting the machine and causing it to tumble over onto its side. Jessica managed to hold onto the lever as it fell but when it landed it started to smoke and sparks were leaping out from inside so she had to drop the roughly 20 feet to the ground to avoid being burned. This only made her sprained ankle hurt even more and all she could do was lie there and wait for either salvation from Brittany or damnation from Rachel, and considering Rachel was still bigger and stronger she feared it would be the latter.

The tackle knocked he wind out of Rachel and before could turn back to face Brittany, who despite still being smaller had managed to put a lot of force into the attack, Brittany grabbed the nearest heavy thing she could find, which lucky for her was a large pipe, and smashed it hard into the back of Rachel’s head. The sound was loud to the larger woman and almost deafening to the smaller one. This caused her to stumble once more but she turned as she did and managed to grab Brittany by the arm not holding the pipe.
“You little shit!” Rachel howled in pained anger, “Fuck shrinking you again, you’re still small enough for me to take care of”
and she place both hands around Brittany’s neck, easily encircling the small woman’s throat, then began to squeeze while she lifted her off the ground.
Brittany found herself struggling in vain to breathe as her feet were suspended in the air, she knew she had to do something or she’d be dead in seconds. As her vision faded she gripped the pipe and swung it again. She felt nothing as she struck empty space. She tried again and once again was met with nothing. With her last bit of strength she swung once more and this time was rewarded with the sensation of hitting something followed by the grip around her neck loosening and her feet hitting the floor once again. Her vision came back and she saw Rachel bent over holding the side of her jaw. She was trying to speak but was unable due to her lower jaw being shattered when it was struck. Brittany took advantage of the moment, fighting the urger to just lie down and pass out from the lack of oxygen, she rushed over and with a leap brought the pipe down into Rachel’s forehead causing her to fall flat on her stomach. Rather than check to make sure she was out she went over and hit her again. And again, with each hit remembering all the torture and humiliation this woman had put her and her friend through.
She thought back to an early memory of her time with Rachel where she put her in a fish bowl with goldfish swimming around and made her tread water for 12 hours,
WHACK! the pipe went down again
She remembered all the times she and her friends were made to give Rachel a foot massage an pedicure. It would take them hours to finish pampering and painting her toenails and their reward was having to clean up the mess before being put away for the night,
WHACK! the pipe went down again
She remembered the daily reminders of how small she was, constantly being forced to compare her tiny body with Rachel’s and made to act like she was some kind of goddess,
WHACK!
Finally, she remembered Tiffany, the fourth member of their tiny group and the youngest of them. She was never able to accept her position as a pet to a psychopath and would fight every chance she could. After one particularly violent outburst where she ending up biting Rachel’s nipple hard enough to draw blood she was gone for a few days only for her body to be brought back in a tiny coffin which was left in their tank for a week as a reminder of what happens when they don’t obey her. When it was finally removed they heard Rachel go into the bathroom followed by a flush and knew exactly what that meant. They were no more than disposable pets to her,
She brought the pipe down again, harder this time and didn’t stop.
She kept repeating the motion until she was hitting the floor of the basement only stopping when she was too tired to go on.

When she regained her senses Brittany looked at what she had done and wanted to throw up but she was able to keep it down. She looked over at the toppled machine and immediately stood up to find Jessica, who was collapsed on the floor. Brittany was worried that she was dead too but when she knelt close she could tell she was breathing heavily. She carefully lifted her into her hand and laid her over on a nearby table then went back to the machine to see if she could stand it up. It took some effort but she managed, however as soon as it was back up the sparks turned into flames that quickly engulfed the machine. Thinking fast, she grabbed a nearby fire extinguisher and was able to put them out but the damage was done, the machine was a charred mess and the only person they knew who could have fixed it was lying headless in a bloody mess near her feet. Not knowing what else to do Brittany picked Jessica up then sat down against a wall and placed her on one of her knees as she brought them up to her chest and began sobbing.

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